Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Elf!

Ordinary World- Buddy is in an orphanage when santa comes. He's around 1 year old and he crawls into santas bag when he comes to the nursery. He comes out of the bag later when he's in the north pole and santa and the elves raise him as one of their own.

Call- Buddy finds out that he's not an elf and that his dad lives in New York city. Papa elf and santa encourage him to go see his dad.

Refusal- He is kind of denying that hes not an elf even though he is. He doesn't think he can make it all the way to New York because it's so far away but santa says he can do it.

Mentor- Buddy's mentor is Santa when he is explaining to him how the ordinary world is and what he can do and what he can't do. "The gum stuck under the railings isn't free candy Buddy".

Threshold- Buddy travels to New York City to find his dad in the Empire State building. "I traveled through the seven levels of the candy cane forrest. Then i walked through the Lincon Tunnel."

Tests, allies, enemies- Buddy tries to see his dad and tell him he's his son but his dad doesn't believe him. He goes to gimbles and meets the girl of his dreams who he falls in love with. Buddy keeps bugging his dad about him being his son and eventually his dad takes him to get a blood test. It turns out buddy is his son, and Walter hates buddy but his wife and son like him. He dates the girl he met at gimbles and they become friends. Miles Finch beats the shiz out of him for calling him an elf, and Walter tells him to "get out of my life".

Ordeal- Buddy runs away and doesn't think he fits in anywhere.Santa crashes in centeral park and Buddy tries to save him from the centeral park rangers. Walter feels bad and realizes he loves buddy so him and his son go to help buddy save santa.

Reward- Buddy saves santa and his family accepts him and loves him. He gets the girl of his dreams and they get married and move to the north pole to live with papa elf and all the other elves.

Road Back- Buddy's Dad writes a kids book about him and Buddy returns to the north pole to live with papa elf and santa.


Ressurection- Buddy's elf spirit is revived and his family ties.


Return with elixer- Buddy returns to the north pole perfectly happy.

Thursday, December 9, 2010

50 words for Maroon 5

If I never see your face again - Maroon 5

Man and this smokin hot girl (named Rihanna) recently broke up. Man is very regretful of it because shes smokin hot...and has a great personality. They trade insults and regrets, and keep coming back to eachother for more...something. In the end they are still broken up. Sad story

Monday, November 29, 2010

Bl bl blurbs

Whiskey Lullaby- Brad Paisly and Allison Krauss

--Two people who were in love fell apart. They were so devistated by this break up or whatever tore them apart they both drank as much as they could to take the pain away of losing the other. Eventually the guy kills himself and is buried under a willow. The girl does the same and they are buried next to eachother under the willow. At both funerals they sang a whiskey lullaby.

Stan- Eminem

--An fan named Stan is obsessed with Eminem and Stan hates his life. Stan writes Eminem for a few months and when Eminem doesn't write back Stan goes crazy and the letters get more violent and more desperate. He gives up on writing Eminem and goes insane. He locks his pregnant girl friend in his trunk and drives off a bridge. All to spite Eminem.

Silence on the line- Chris Leadoux

--Husband left the family to go join the rodio. He calls his wife to tell her he's sorry and he's coming home to her and she says she needs someone to do some of the work around the house. The husband says he's bringing home a clippled rodeo cow boy for company. The wife says to leave the bum, she needs a man who can work. He hangs up and it turns out he's the crippled cow boy. He goes to Mexico.

King of Anything- Sarah Barelllis

--Girl is with this guy and they are both getting coffe and she starts singing. Girl is dating guy who's very opinionated and controlling. She doesn't buy into his act and tells him he's not her king. She basically just tells him off the entire song.

99 red baloons- Goldfinger

--Man lets go of 99 red baloons. He tells the story of his life in the war and how the baloons are always there. He is in war and talks about it and he's fighting the Germans and then at the end he says they are all dreams and memories so all those times the balloons were going by they were just memories. Then he thinks of someones memory and lets it go at the end.

Song Lyrics

Stan-Eminem

Plot-Obsessed fan writes eminem. Kills himself
Character-Eminem, Stan, Stans girlfriend, Stans unborn child
Conflict-Eminem isn't writing back to stan and stan goes crazy.
Theme- Depressing, obsession
Setting-Stans house, Stans car

http://www.metrolyrics.com/stan-lyrics-eminem.html

Memories

10.Mistakenly loved her, that little whore.
9.Why does breathing seem so impossible.
8.Love snuck up on me, i ran.
7.Regrets stored away on coat racks.
6.Life before death, strength before weakness.
5.If you don't like it, leave.
4.I had sex with your wife!
3.I'm not asking, I'm not complying.
2.Water tunnels and flat sticks...ouch.
1.Come follow me the savior said!!!

Monday, November 8, 2010

Rain dialouge....REVISED!!!

The scene--a boy and a girl are sitting on a park bench in the rain. You are both under an umbrella in black rain coats. She has jeans and yellow boots on and the boy has jeans and converse on. The rain is pattering on the umbrella and the leaves of the trees around them, its splashing in the puddles like tiny bombs throwing debree of smaller water droplets. The girl looks around and looks at the boy's green eyes and the boy looks at the girl's blue eyes one of them speaks and says.....(g-girl, b-boy).

g- I love the smell of rain
b- Me too, i think it's kind of like what heaven will smell like
g- I agree, maybe the rain carries a little bit of the scent from heaven with it.
b- That's my bet
g- Everyone love's the smell so it just makes sense
b- Yeah, it's the best
g- I wonder what heaven will look like
b- Yeah me to....can i ask you something?
g- What?
b- I've been wanting to ask you this for a while, it's just never seemed like the right time.
g- Wh-wh what?
b- Will you marry me?
g- No
b- What?! Why?
g-Because.....because I'm not what you think i am...
b-Bella! What are you saying?
g-Edward....Im a vampire! (vccshhhhh (Vampire noise))
b-Well....I was going to divorce you anywaysss i wasss jussst tryingssss to convince my parentssss I'm not gay (say in gay voice).
g-Really?
b-You bet honey cakessss!
g-Good that means i can eat you....your blood....it's like a drug to me!!! (vccshhhhhh!!!)
b-GAHHHHHH!!!!
g-mmmmmmmmmmm

Monday, November 1, 2010

Rain dialouge

The scene--a boy and a girl are sitting on a park bench in the rain. You are both under an umbrella in black rain coats. She has jeans and yellow boots on and the boy has jeans and converse on. The rain is pattering on the umbrella and the leaves of the trees around them, its splashing in the puddles like tiny bombs throwing debree of smaller water droplets. The girl looks around and looks at the boy's green eyes and the boy looks at the girl's blue eyes one of them speaks and says.....(g-girl, b-boy).

g- I love the smell of rain
b- Me too, i think it's kind of like what heaven will smell like
g- I agree, maybe the rain carries a little bit of the scent from heaven with it.
b- That's my bet
g- Everyone love's the smell so it just makes sense
b- Yeah, it's the best
g- I wonder what heaven will look like
b- Hopefully you
g- What?
b- I've been wanting to ask you something for a while, it's just never seemed like the right time.
g- Wh-wh what?
b- Will you marry me?
g- No
b- What?! Why?
g- Just kidding. Of course I'll marry you, i would love nothing more

Monday, October 18, 2010

Direct Orders

Rock out like you just fell in love. Rock out like Obama just died. Rock out like it smells like rain. Rock out like you just kissed a girl. Rock out like you just won the Nobel prize. Rock out like you just found that pen you love. Rock out like you just got a job at Nike. rock out like you just got a job with Apple. Rock out liek you just discovered the cure for cancer. Rock out like Willy Wonka just gave you an everlasting Gob-Stopper. Rock out like your a real boy. rock out like you just met your long lost brother. rock out like your wife is super hot. Rock out like your a genius and you just realized it. Rock out like you discovered a new planet and claimed it as your own. Rock out like your the best at whatever you try. Rock out like you have your three dream super powers. rock out like you died a painless death. Rock out like you just won the lottery.

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Shake the dust

This is for the people with dirt floors shake the dust. This is for the regretful people shake the dust. This is for the broken and beaten, this is for the good people who went bad, this is for the crippled athletes shake the dust. This is for those who dreamed and failed, this is for the people who want love, lost love, and dont knkow why to try anymore, shake the dust. This is for the winners that became losers, this is for the underachievers and non believers, shake the dust. This is for those of us that wish for something better, this is for everyone who feels unnoticed and uncared for. Shake the dust! This is for the calloused hands that worked hard just to lose everything, this is for the people who think they have no real friends, this is for the self concious who dont see that they are truly beautiful, shake the dust! This is for the people who have nothing to look forward to. Shake the dust

Terrible Poetry

-Booze alcohol
Try it on baby
Well i dont look good in no Armaini suite
No Gucci shoes or designer boots
I've tried the latest lines from a to z
Oh if she called me I'd be there
Sussudio oh oh
Ah she's all I need all of my life
You remind me of the jeep i wanna ride it
Baby you know what I want real bad
Brotherhood of man
And I, I am feeling a little peculiar
And I take a deep breath and get real high
And learn to fly again
This time will be the last time
No we didn't light it
But we tried to fight it
The haze inside us
There was a good man named paul revere
Along with the man in the hat
And I think its stupid
Blame it on the booze
Blame it on the booze
Blame it on the booze
Blame it on the booze
Go get the news
I want to cruise
On a boat
I hope it floats

Sunday, September 19, 2010

Im thinking about you like roses think about beauty
Like beauty thinks about you
Im thinking about you like wind thinks about blowing
Like rows think about rowing
Like the sun thinks about glowing
Like i think about knowing what your doing and where your going
Im thinking about you like grass thinks about growing
Like bowls tihnk about bowling
Im thinking about you like windows think about seeing
Im thinking about you like humans think about being birds and flying away.

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Love is...

Love is a blinds man guide dog.
Love is a wooden belt. - it's awkward unless it's hand made for you.
Love is hair thats been bleached several times.-There's lost love covered by others and layers to discover.
Love is a computer.-Its complicated.
Love is a handwritten book.-Its long and tiring but its worth it.
Love is a whining dog.-Pay attention to it and it kisses you.
Love is a forrest of pines.- There are so many but each is unique.
Love is a giant amazingly comfortable soft blanket.
Love is a diamond.
Love is a white gun.

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Introduction

My introduction....well my name is Pete Maravich. My friends call me Pistol Pete or just Pistol usually. I took creative writing because I love to write and Nelson class has always been my funnest and favorite class so I figured this class would be no different. But mostly I took it because I love to write. My hobbies that i like to do are basketball, writing reading and I love to watch movies. Thats all I'm going to write about my hobbies because i don't want to give to much  away. Some of my pet peeves are when people chew with their mouths open, insult people to make themselves feel better, when people dont know how to shut up and keep talking no matter the situation, baggy low riding jeans, the Celtics current team, Ms. Felix (i spell Ms. like that because im assuming she's not married). Rude girls, annoying children, screaming children, and cats in general. I want to go on a mission and go to college to get my degree in whatever i decide to do and get married in the temple, and die a relativly painless death. And that pretty much sums me up as much as I want to sum me up.